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I Lost Myself.

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Somewhere;
Within the ocean's-
Overly sensitive serenity.

I can feel,
My twisted innards unwillingly-
Suffocate;
As our burning sun-
Falls beneath a cotton candy horizon.

I'm fishing for my (anchor adorned) sinking personality-
But I think I lost track of my wiggling bait a long time ago.
A prompt from my creative writing class~
Had to write an extended metaphor with in a poem.
Hope I succeeded:heart:
The bait is my hope jsyk<3
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NearlyInvisibleMind's avatar
This is wonderful :clap: , and beautiful :frail:...and sad...:tears: