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Painted Love

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He held my cold roughed hands tightly with intertwined gold digging fingers that leaked disgusting desperation and broken despair in sweet puffs of unusual femininity. I think that if I were wearing mittens they'd be soaked clear through and sagging with heavy false hope at his dog like want to be always needed. He forever reaks of two faced loyalty and sweaty sex cigarettes passed to and fro numerous mystery lips of half grown wannabe women we pretend he doesn't sleep in. This tasteless love lacks a true muse with so many rotting secrets and tell-tale lies piling up higher than the night's star crossed sky.

Beginning of a story for my Creative Writing class~
Was voted first place :heart:
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NearlyInvisibleMind's avatar
This imagery is phenomenal!